Dear Oran,
Well you finally got some of the assignments done! They are interesting to read and fluent in English in spite of the fact that you don't tend to use capital letters! I wish I could see a higher quantity as well of work but your quality is very good.
Your final grade is 75.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger
Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Sunday, May 17, 2009
Sunday, May 10, 2009
Sy's Diary
10'th of May,2009, in one weeks time i'll be sitting on the electric chair. I'm so cunfused, and i cant stand this place. I just got here and i'm in trouble, the crooks in here aren't so friendly to new guys. But i still found some nice guys around here like Danny and Lance, that were locked up because they rubbed a national bank and shot one of the police-men. God i hate police-men! especialy in here. Like the prisonors, they dont like the new guys and they are very cruel. Well, Apparently i get what i deserv. I cant stop thinking about what happend, and where are Kathy and Eddie. Ther's no one i can share this with here. My plan was genius, and i messed it up! I was so close to being a millionaire, but instead they sent me to this place and to the electric chair. The food is obnoxious and i'm bored sick. If i could kill King i would, he ruined my life.
My life isn't worth living. I cant wait for next week.
10'th of May,2009, in one weeks time i'll be sitting on the electric chair. I'm so cunfused, and i cant stand this place. I just got here and i'm in trouble, the crooks in here aren't so friendly to new guys. But i still found some nice guys around here like Danny and Lance, that were locked up because they rubbed a national bank and shot one of the police-men. God i hate police-men! especialy in here. Like the prisonors, they dont like the new guys and they are very cruel. Well, Apparently i get what i deserv. I cant stop thinking about what happend, and where are Kathy and Eddie. Ther's no one i can share this with here. My plan was genius, and i messed it up! I was so close to being a millionaire, but instead they sent me to this place and to the electric chair. The food is obnoxious and i'm bored sick. If i could kill King i would, he ruined my life.
My life isn't worth living. I cant wait for next week.
The plot of my story is actually the kindnapping of Jeffry and the way the police and the other main characters tried to bring him back. The ransom was a problem for Douglas because for saving Jeffry that is not even his son, he needed 500,000$. When the story was coming to an end it got more intresting and there were lots of surprises.
The kidnappers took Jeffry outside Douglas King's house, that was in 87th Precinct. They took him to an old farmhouse away from the kidnapping area. Douglas King and his family are very rich. They have a really big house. all the characters are usually in the living-room and the kitchen. The three most important places in the story are: Douglas King's house, the old farmhouse where the kidnappers kept Jeffry and the police-station. The characters are mostly in those places.
Sunday, May 3, 2009
The main character is the boy that was kidnapped, Jeffry Reynolds, son of Charles Reynolds, chauffeur to Douglas King'. Douglas is very rich. His son, Bobby King' is Jeffry's friend. The kidnappers took the wrong kid, they took jeffry instead of Bobby and they want a ransom of $500,000. Jeffry is involved in the story because he's the kidnapped kid.
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